With all the blessings that God has bestowed on us, the change it took, came at a beautiful price.
I'll never let you go... not even in death. If I could do it all again I'd marry you twice. And soon as my sun sets and I'm blessed to see you again... I'll be on one knee to make you my Heavenly wife.
We have a beautiful family. We have a beautiful house. We have a beautiful child. We have a beautiful life.
And with your gracious response to my earnest question, by summers end I'll have a beautiful wife.
We've learned so much, we've shared so much, we've grown so much, and we've come so far.
We believe in love, we've learned to trust and we grew from who we were.... to essentially what we are.
Making college mistakes and clinging to high school dreams with habits of old and friends of new.
Through experimentations and time complications I never would've dreamed it would have brought me to you.
The temptations of life, the challenges of growth, expectations we hold in our heart are so dear.
The fears of failure and the worries of doubt... they all dissipate every minute you're near.
We'll have a beautiful family. We'll have a beautiful house. We'll have a beautiful child. We'll have a beautiful life.
Do I Ignore the worries of rejection for loves possibilities and trustfully roll life's beautiful dice?
Do I attempt to persuade this beautiful stranger of our future, my troth and of love's earnest plight.
Or do I allow her to walk away again... and ignore that this could be love at first sight?
Do I attempt to persuade this beautiful stranger of our future, my troth and of love's earnest plight.
Or do I allow her to walk away again... and ignore that this could be love at first sight?
I wanted to see if I could write a love story in reverse. Starting from It's end then ending at it's beginning. Then in the end you realize that the entire poem is just a possibility.... a thought or an idea that a guy is having about himself and a female that he hasn't even approached yet.
ReplyDeleteAs always, thank you for taking the time to read my works.
-Stephen N.
You've outdone yourself once again!! I absolutely love it! #1fan
ReplyDeleteJust read it. Very creative!!!! You're so talented!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem so beautifully written. I needed that breathe of fresh air. Thank you for sharing and keep them coming, especially for us whose true loves haven't found them yet. :-)
ReplyDeleteVery cool..i like very much that it starts from the end!
ReplyDeleteI didn't even catch that at first! Yes!! #HeDidThat
DeleteDope! And so relatable. I know I've had that feeling a few times!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteWow! I love this dude!
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice poem looking in retrospective kind of looking at the end and rewinding to the beginning.
ReplyDeleteVery well written! Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and concept. I imagined the verses as lyrics too.
ReplyDeletePerfect!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poems, very talented, love them all.
ReplyDeleteLOVED IT!!
ReplyDeleteLove the poem, well written. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteNice!!
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ReplyDeleteMore!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnother journey only to remind us that the first step is crucial
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